11/15/11

Having the extra days to work on the paper gave me more time to make sure that I supported ideas from the articles. I made sure that i explained what was going on in the article and hopefully it flows well with the paper. The sample didn't really help me that much. I feel like the strongest point of my paper is that i found 4 different perspectives and they all relate to the topic but from different looks. I am concerned that the paper wasn't long enough. I though that it had to be 3-4 pages.